Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Learning to use different language features.

I use a hook in my writing so people go wow and want to read  my story.  For my about my lava lamp, i used  a question to make my reader interested.  It was hard to think of the question because I was just mucked up.  Then I got focused.  Next time I will concentrate.

1 comment:

Miss Boucher said...

Great work Troy, I am really impressed with your simile. You have worked really hard on your writing, nice job!